This was cute but I feel like because of the short length, everything jumped around with no real flow or consistency. Like they went from penetration with no prep to him putting on the lingerie to the foreplay that should’ve happened in chapter 2 happening in chaps 3 and 4 and idk, it just feels like the scenes were out of order.
I get that this is just hentai with no plot needed but y’know, I think that there was missed potential. (Also the top should’ve swallowed the nut.)
This was cute but I feel like because of the short length, everything jumped around with no real flow or consistency. Like they went from penetration with no prep to him putting on the lingerie to the foreplay that should’ve happened in chapter 2 happening in chaps 3 and 4 and idk, it just feels like the scenes were out of order.
I get that this is just hentai with no plot needed but y’know, I think that there was missed potential. (Also the top should’ve swallowed the nut.)