It's a classic and incredibly enjoyable in the first two-thirds, but it could have been so much better if 1. It showed how Mookyul fell in love with Ewon again as an adult, rather than relying solely on their childhood connection. 2. There was less over-the-top drama toward the end. 3.The disgusting situation with Mookyul and the old man had been handled in a way that didn’t damage the reader's faith in Mookyul's love for Ewon—as it, unfortunately, did for me
It's a classic and incredibly enjoyable in the first two-thirds, but it could have been so much better if 1. It showed how Mookyul fell in love with Ewon again as an adult, rather than relying solely on their childhood connection. 2. There was less over-the-top drama toward the end. 3.The disgusting situation with Mookyul and the old man had been handled in a way that didn’t damage the reader's faith in Mookyul's love for Ewon—as it, unfortunately, did for me