I think my main critique with this story is that it juggles many plot points and does a good job in many of them but fails in another same amount. If you guys remember, the very large plot point about the ML’s past relationship with the teacher. It it brought up as extremely big and secretive. Then it is talked about briefly, then it disappears, literally never mentioned again. Almost like it never happened. Other things happened with similar like “what”. Not saying it’s a bad way of story telling as I absolutely love this story but there are some thing that seem questionable
I think my main critique with this story is that it juggles many plot points and does a good job in many of them but fails in another same amount. If you guys remember, the very large plot point about the ML’s past relationship with the teacher. It it brought up as extremely big and secretive. Then it is talked about briefly, then it disappears, literally never mentioned again. Almost like it never happened. Other things happened with similar like “what”. Not saying it’s a bad way of story telling as I absolutely love this story but there are some thing that seem questionable