Girl if you don’t put some pants on…..cheeks, pole, and hole just slapping in the wind...

Eldraco December 27, 2024 12:18 am

Girl if you don’t put some pants on…..cheeks, pole, and hole just slapping in the wind like bologna on a flag stand.

Author really said rape plot device B lost his arm and would have deffo passed out from the blood loss and died but I gotta make him escape so he can live to rape another day!

The MC is done so dirty with damsel in distress syndrome. Like bitch use your words these last few chapters when accused wrongfully by primary rape plot device A and now Yandere twink he just stares mouth agape.

I refuse to learn names until these characters start charactering! Everyone is basic walking around with a single characteristic.

MC: oh so Fuckable damsel with a savior complex
Rape device 1: Sex crazed Mutant
Twink: Yandere, “notice me Hyung”
Rape device 2: I’m big, rapey, and stupid “Protien!”

The most interesting character so far is the black haired dude was the 2nd in command of the mall because he at least had layers and some intrigue.

What is happening lolol. Nice art though!

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    Rojoboto December 27, 2024 5:16 am

    I laughed so gd hard at this comment (≧∀≦)