Im disappointed, and it has such a good premise. Now, this might be coming from an ignorant place, but so far every manhua I’ve read has had this choppy and horrible story writing (aside from THE GL NGL) that makes it jump all over the place.
It truly felt unorganized and uncordinated, which was SUCH A SHAME since it was really cute if you could read past it. Some moments are better told than others and u get a clearer picture, but this just wasn’t it. It felt like a story being told by AI if I’m being frank.
If anyone knows of another story with a similar premise and better narrative telling I’d appreciate the recommendations.
Im disappointed, and it has such a good premise. Now, this might be coming from an ignorant place, but so far every manhua I’ve read has had this choppy and horrible story writing (aside from THE GL NGL) that makes it jump all over the place.
It truly felt unorganized and uncordinated, which was SUCH A SHAME since it was really cute if you could read past it. Some moments are better told than others and u get a clearer picture, but this just wasn’t it. It felt like a story being told by AI if I’m being frank.
If anyone knows of another story with a similar premise and better narrative telling I’d appreciate the recommendations.