Subpar story telling. It very lacking, has no depth, the FL has no spine, useless clichés, useless climax, the side stories are more interesting than the main one, the story felt half assed because it doesn't go into detail about the potential plot(War, kidnapping of th marquise, the future)
EVERYTHING
Everything is Subpar.
The art improved a whooooooooollleeeee lot compared to the first chapter thoヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
Subpar story telling. It very lacking, has no depth, the FL has no spine, useless clichés, useless climax, the side stories are more interesting than the main one, the story felt half assed because it doesn't go into detail about the potential plot(War, kidnapping of th marquise, the future)
EVERYTHING
Everything is Subpar.
The art improved a whooooooooollleeeee lot compared to the first chapter thoヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~