this is really good!
Duh, real bad you mean ? It’s so evil/ dumb i broke a new record and dropped before the end of the second chapter : seriously both her dad and brother poisoned her to death ? What kind of crazy crap is that ?!
It doesn’t even seem they were magically brain washed, and I don’t care for either bad revenge or the big power of big money making her above all rank :(
Not a fan of this genre? Then why do you even bother. All the things you mentioned are common for this kind of stories.
This good?......ima marinate it