that plot point during this last sex scene feels like it came out of nowhere lol like at least with the initial plot we could tell kotaro felt insecure but this last one had like no lead up and came out of nothing like not even reading between the lines could save this bc literally the chapter before he was like get your ass ready. it just feels like unnecessary stalling or worse bad writing. i know haha bro expects good writing from a smut comic but like at least before there was logical consistency. i would rather kotaro had said actually i realized i was into edging lol bc idk what the point of that was otherwise.
that plot point during this last sex scene feels like it came out of nowhere lol like at least with the initial plot we could tell kotaro felt insecure but this last one had like no lead up and came out of nothing like not even reading between the lines could save this bc literally the chapter before he was like get your ass ready. it just feels like unnecessary stalling or worse bad writing. i know haha bro expects good writing from a smut comic but like at least before there was logical consistency. i would rather kotaro had said actually i realized i was into edging lol bc idk what the point of that was otherwise.