What's wrong with this?

Nizze December 24, 2024 3:01 am

Idk... theres something about the art that just feels... iffy? I won't even criticize the characters and plot cuz tbh I barelly skim read it... because the art was so weirdly bad it trew me off... idk if its the eyes or the shading or what... but it kinda feel amateurish? Idk how to explain... it just feels weird...
I think I felt this way with a couple other comics as well... as if it's a mix between webcomic and mangá? Like they couldn't decide between coloring it like a webcomic or an anime? It's weird and idk how to express properly... it just really weirds me out?

Responses
    merde January 4, 2025 12:10 am

    similar art with josei/straight smut

    Nizze January 4, 2025 8:07 am
    similar art with josei/straight smut merde

    Maybe? Some oh those do have some... subpar... art... I think it's the inconsistency that bothers me? Some characters as good-looking and well drawn... some ugly and well drawn, some badly drawn... same with clothes detailing... and their exagerated expressions remind me of manga...
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    I don't think I'll keep reading this one anyway...

    Gerrie February 28, 2025 10:24 pm

    Nah cause like why does the first bully we encounter have more details than almost any other character introduced-

    Nizze February 28, 2025 11:28 pm
    Nah cause like why does the first bully we encounter have more details than almost any other character introduced- Gerrie

    For real! Even the backgrounds ate better drawn than most characters... and like... on ch 30... was that girl using her pinky to make that silly face? Don't people usually use their index finger un that pose?? That looks like it was drawn wrongly... I still don't like the art... and the plot feels... weak... imma really dropping it now...