Crammed and short, but cute story

Alycat.11 December 23, 2024 6:15 am

It feels like this story should have been 30+ chapters with more in-depth storytelling and character development. The story had so much to build on with the monster types and powers. They could have described so much more. It’s honestly sad that they cut it down and smashed it all into 5 chapters when it could have been so much more. It’s a cute little story, but don’t go in expecting a masterpiece. Nice short read even if a little disappointing.

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