I feel like this has SO MUCH potential as a story but so sad it got rushed ☹ like it had to many plot points that ended nowhere too. I feel like this could’ve been WAYYY longer but I don’t hate the artist tho, just saying. I feel like the brother this just got swept under a rug when I feel like it could’ve been a good plot point. And idk if it’s just me but the red hair bully just got a personality transformation out of nowhere like wasn’t he supposed to be the bully?? Now he’s just the random side character friend that gets with the second ml…
Anyways the art is cute and it had the potential to be a really good dramatic, melancholic story.
I feel like this has SO MUCH potential as a story but so sad it got rushed ☹ like it had to many plot points that ended nowhere too. I feel like this could’ve been WAYYY longer but I don’t hate the artist tho, just saying. I feel like the brother this just got swept under a rug when I feel like it could’ve been a good plot point. And idk if it’s just me but the red hair bully just got a personality transformation out of nowhere like wasn’t he supposed to be the bully?? Now he’s just the random side character friend that gets with the second ml…
Anyways the art is cute and it had the potential to be a really good dramatic, melancholic story.