Responses
I guess what I wanted to say is that all this redemption character development build up worked really well (unlike some other stories where they just brush all the wrongs aside like nothing ever happened lmfao)
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Yall I gotta wake up in 3 hours since I couldn’t stop reading this lol
All I gotta say is wow, what a journey. I feel like I grew along with all the characters because the character development COOKED. Can’t wait for the side stories!
I know some people are just going to be like ew shit story due to seme being a dickbag rapist. I mean, you ain’t wrong lmfao, can’t argue there because I felt the exact same way. The story started off so slow and I highkey had to tough it through all the non-consensual sex stuff. But at the same time, all this fucked up shit made sense. Literally everything is supposed to be a shithole and you just gotta live thru it. Gang/mafia, debt, depression/suicide….like it ain’t all pretty rainbows. Idk what I’m saying, it’s 5am no sleep me talking. Creator did a good job framing the desperation, loneliness, and various levels of relationships between all the characters well :D and at the end of the day, I do love me some fucked psychological(ish) BL
one complaint is that IM SO ANGRY THE DAD GOT OFF SCOTT FREE. Maybe something happened throughout all the mess but my brain just didn’t notice it. UGH I WANT HIM DEAD RESURRECTED ONLY TO BE TORTURED AGAIN