Holy shit this was like filled with every shitty cliched yaoi trope lolol right down to th...

helvetica December 21, 2024 4:56 am

Holy shit this was like filled with every shitty cliched yaoi trope lolol right down to the “omg I hate getting raped by this guy! He’s not like the other guy(ml) who also technically raped me!”

How is he “always protecting him” when he was legit blackmailing him for sex for like majority of the story I fucking can’t.

Should’ve written less sex scenes and focused more on developing their relationship after the first sex scenes honestly. Cause there’s just so many random jumps in their relationship lol

But this is like with a lot of bls(again, this is filled with tons of cliche yaoi tropes(not the good ones nor handled well) like, if you have them, at least address it better instead of skipping it and just adding in more smut


ALSO DOES THE AUTHOR KNOW WHAT THE OMEGAVERSE IS??? Like, I’m not an avid reader, but even I know that only alphas can get omegas pregnant! I legit had to stop when the friend said he was going to impregnate him. Like, sir??? I thought you were a beta??? How’re you gonna go about that???

Also did the seme use a condom in any of the scenes? I didn’t pay attention and just realized this now, but holy shit uke better be taking some morning after pills and birth control honestly smh

Responses
    BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade December 21, 2024 7:33 am

    yeah the writing is inconsistent af, but i most note. in the omegaverse depending on the writer is weither an omega can get pregnant from just alphas or if it includes betas. which normally when it does it makes a beta's chances for fertilizing their omega love as low.

    helvetica December 21, 2024 10:45 am
    yeah the writing is inconsistent af, but i most note. in the omegaverse depending on the writer is weither an omega can get pregnant from just alphas or if it includes betas. which normally when it does it make... BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade

    Ahhhh okay thanks! As I said before, I don’t read omegaverse stuff often so I was thrown in for a loop when that came up lol XD I think this is the first time I’ve seen one where betas can also impregnate omegas lol

    BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade December 22, 2024 7:53 am
    Ahhhh okay thanks! As I said before, I don’t read omegaverse stuff often so I was thrown in for a loop when that came up lol XD I think this is the first time I’ve seen one where betas can also impregnate o... helvetica

    oh yeah, no problem, i read it a bunch. i read a bunch of different things for fun. so if you have questions on something, just hit me up and i will take a look to see if i know the lore behind the universe.

    helvetica December 22, 2024 8:14 am
    oh yeah, no problem, i read it a bunch. i read a bunch of different things for fun. so if you have questions on something, just hit me up and i will take a look to see if i know the lore behind the universe. BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade

    lol thank you!!




    Now I gotta rethink the isekai bl story I thought up where the mc was isekaied into an omegaverse story but was relieved to be a beta so they wouldn’t get involved with the omegaverse stuff lol (I’m joking btw I know it’s up to the author lol)

    BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade December 22, 2024 8:35 am
    helvetica December 22, 2024 8:37 am
    oh there are a few isekaied omegaverse yaois.https://www.mangago.me/read-manga/omega_ni_dake_wa_naritakunai_isekai_tensei_shitara_ane_no_bl_manga_no_nakadeshita/think you might like that one. BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade

    lol I’ve read it XD I was just talking about some random story I had in my head lol

    BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade December 22, 2024 9:09 am
    lol I’ve read it XD I was just talking about some random story I had in my head lol helvetica

    sounds awesome. i hope you can pen it some day.

    helvetica December 22, 2024 9:13 am
    sounds awesome. i hope you can pen it some day. BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade

    Thanks haha, hopefully my depression will stop beating my ass lol

    BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade December 22, 2024 4:03 pm
    Thanks haha, hopefully my depression will stop beating my ass lol helvetica

    good luck, depression is a jerk. surprised no on wrote a spicy book with depression as the main character.

    helvetica December 22, 2024 11:26 pm
    good luck, depression is a jerk. surprised no on wrote a spicy book with depression as the main character. BelladonnaDeadlyNightshade

    LOL INSIDE OUT: BL EDITION