Umm

Karitoriki December 19, 2024 7:01 pm

Imo this story could've been something more tbh but everything just became rushed and overdone
Wym you stretching his nipples like that...is it a rubber band? Y'all are talking one min and the next y'all were in the room. I didn't even see you walk in! You just teleported.
The artstyle is also shaky. I'm not drying to diss because I can't draw but...bruh. They were shapeshifting fr.
The story is good. I can't rate it above that. More work could've been done obv. But it is what it is. I really wish it had more substance.
But it's an okay read

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