I think if this was expanded upon and given more time and thought, it'd have been an insanely good story. I could totally see this being played out and the ML having these insane ways to get the MC to be with him, but the MC wouldn't be stupid enough to not realize what he's getting up to and still loves him for it.
It felt very empty, it repeated that the ML was so sickly so many times and I was like "I get it already!" BUT I'm not saying it was bad, I really enjoyed how the MC isn't some dumbass and has a keen intuition, it definitely feels like it's someone's first serious project and they just wanted to get it out there and have fun with it.
I think if this was expanded upon and given more time and thought, it'd have been an insanely good story. I could totally see this being played out and the ML having these insane ways to get the MC to be with him, but the MC wouldn't be stupid enough to not realize what he's getting up to and still loves him for it.
It felt very empty, it repeated that the ML was so sickly so many times and I was like "I get it already!" BUT I'm not saying it was bad, I really enjoyed how the MC isn't some dumbass and has a keen intuition, it definitely feels like it's someone's first serious project and they just wanted to get it out there and have fun with it.