I liked this, I really did. But I know that I would've LOVED this if it was longer, if there was more chapters where they explored how much they feel towards each other. In almost every chapter Yuusei was pulling away and hiding his feelings from Itsuki so we never did see them acting on their feelings properly as lovers. In the last chapter weren't Yuusei and that girl still together??? Or maybe I just missed something? I just really believe this would've been way hella better with them going on a date or even just talking more about their feelings and exactly Itsuki felt towards Yuusei. I also wish Itsuki finds something he genuinely feels passionate about, maybe we could've gotten a chapter where he sees a hobby or something like that that's he's not naturally good at so he strives to be better at it and thus giving him passions. It just feels like there could've so much more.
Also on that chapter when Itsuki heard what his brother said after all that shit from school hurt me. He started playing for his brother so he did his best, and then because of it he hears those kinds of things. Brother-san was feeling inferior and I understand just how much insecurity can affect you but I wish he atleast made sure his brother couldn't hear him and that he apologised quicker instead of letting the trauma marinate on Itsuki. That kind of shit is traumatic and can't easily be rid off by saying sorry so I wish we also got a few extras where it shows brother-san showing how sorry he is and how much he loves Itsuki.
Ugh I just really think this could've been way better longer.
I liked this, I really did. But I know that I would've LOVED this if it was longer, if there was more chapters where they explored how much they feel towards each other. In almost every chapter Yuusei was pulling away and hiding his feelings from Itsuki so we never did see them acting on their feelings properly as lovers. In the last chapter weren't Yuusei and that girl still together??? Or maybe I just missed something? I just really believe this would've been way hella better with them going on a date or even just talking more about their feelings and exactly Itsuki felt towards Yuusei. I also wish Itsuki finds something he genuinely feels passionate about, maybe we could've gotten a chapter where he sees a hobby or something like that that's he's not naturally good at so he strives to be better at it and thus giving him passions. It just feels like there could've so much more.
Also on that chapter when Itsuki heard what his brother said after all that shit from school hurt me. He started playing for his brother so he did his best, and then because of it he hears those kinds of things. Brother-san was feeling inferior and I understand just how much insecurity can affect you but I wish he atleast made sure his brother couldn't hear him and that he apologised quicker instead of letting the trauma marinate on Itsuki. That kind of shit is traumatic and can't easily be rid off by saying sorry so I wish we also got a few extras where it shows brother-san showing how sorry he is and how much he loves Itsuki.
Ugh I just really think this could've been way better longer.