I think this story could've been better with proper pacing and some fight scenes here and ...

SadPudding December 18, 2024 10:11 am

I think this story could've been better with proper pacing and some fight scenes here and there. It's only 10 chapters but can maybe be fully fleshed out in 30-40. It's like the author only drew the interesting bits but we have barely any context for those bits.

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