my review

goonz December 16, 2024 9:45 pm

this is so messy and unorganized and there are so many god damn plot holes. i still read it, of course, i enjoy a good dilf lmao. i know this is not done yet, but i do want to give my review on some points
1: the mc is so god damn annoying and he cant make up his mind, he has the emotional intelligence of an inbred chihuahua
2: jihyung couldve defended himself by explaining that he did, infact, love mc and he only did what he did because he had some sort of motive
3: the father couldve ALSO defended himself by explaining that he didnt kill his wife, and that he did infact love his son
4: the sex scenes are so repetitive and some are literally not necessary, the author couldve used uo those chapters to explain plot holes instead lol

anyways thats my take so far, this was enjoyable at first but it became a little grueling to finish up. i wouldve honestly dropped it a long time ago had i not liked the art style (which was rocky in some chapters, why do they randomly have necks the width of their heads?)

Responses
    goonz December 16, 2024 9:52 pm

    actually nevermind this IS the end? i just noticed. well, that makes things worse! lol so many topics left unfinished