I'm reading this at 3 in the morning, sorry for the frustration

ZenyNascar December 16, 2024 7:23 pm

Great, a long-list of flash back. IMO, this story would've been better off just revealing past information slowly, rather than throwing a bucket of cold water straight onto our face.

Considering this story starts of (before the flash back) with a lot of ambiguity on how close these two really are.

I was hoping that we'll get a snippet of short flashback about past events every now and then WHILE the main storyline is still going, REALLY building up on that suspense, ya know?

Alas, they just throw everything at once. Oh well, I hope the flash back ends soon. Don't get me wrong, it's cute and all. But, I think the way they handle the flashbacks FEELS like a side story. I thought they'll stop after introducing our soon to be angsty lover boy, but nooo, they kept going.

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