This is supposed to be an official release?? Parts of it read like minimally edited MTL, e...

VultureButts December 15, 2024 2:30 am

This is supposed to be an official release?? Parts of it read like minimally edited MTL, especially that conversation right in the beginning of the chapter. Very odd, stilted dialogue. I really hope it gets better, because the premise is interesting and the character art is nice.

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    SaladSlug December 15, 2024 7:37 am

    Yeah it's actually awful. It also feels like they were trying to make it interesting by basically showing part 2 of the chapter before part 1, but it's just chaotic and badly executed

    VultureButts December 16, 2024 12:40 am
    Yeah it's actually awful. It also feels like they were trying to make it interesting by basically showing part 2 of the chapter before part 1, but it's just chaotic and badly executed SaladSlug

    It's really unfortunate. :/ Totally unacceptable quality for something they're charging real money to read (and not even own!). Also just a spit in the face to the creator- I'd be livid if something I worked on got a localisation with so little care put into it.