I don't know what to think

Greenflagenjoyer December 13, 2024 1:43 pm

I feel like this story falls flat for some reason... And it's odd, because the premise and the characters are interesting. ML is s saint tbh. He's very patient and understanding. I feel like some scenes are meant to be very meaningful, but they don't land. It's odd.

Responses
    Iamdefinitelynotonincognitomod December 13, 2024 6:41 pm

    I think we will see ml's pov too and then somethings just click idk about yhe manwa but the novel has it.

    Spring rolls December 13, 2024 9:16 pm

    I agree, I think it’s dialogue and the fact that despite the fact that the characters are interesting in terms of back story we haven’t been seen them portray emotions in a unique or engaging way.