Need your opinions!!! Please

Kisa-chan April 22, 2017 10:35 am

Hi so i tried writing BL stuff and here is what I've come up with:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/104209675-pencil-boy-x-boy-yaoi

It is just a one shot so i am hoping dat you'll try and check it out and it would be awesome if you voice out your opinions and thoughts about it. Thank you very much in advance!!!! (=・ω・=)

Responses
    Nxco.ni April 22, 2017 10:59 am

    wait whut??? so the main character is a girl? wait what do you mean by ''better than my beloved'' ? do she have a lover? nonetheless its amazing

    Kaykay April 22, 2017 11:08 am
    wait whut??? so the main character is a girl? wait what do you mean by ''better than my beloved'' ? do she have a lover? nonetheless its amazing Nxco.ni

    Its a boy! And better than my beloved means better than nii chan right?
    The story is good.. well done

    Kisa-chan April 22, 2017 11:16 am
    wait whut??? so the main character is a girl? wait what do you mean by ''better than my beloved'' ? do she have a lover? nonetheless its amazing Nxco.ni

    Yeeep da main character is a girl and by saying "better than my beloved" she is referring to nii-chan. Awww omg thank you so much for reading!!! ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄

    Kisa-chan April 22, 2017 11:18 am
    Its a boy! And better than my beloved means better than nii chan right?The story is good.. well done Kaykay

    Da main character is actually a girl lol. Sorry it is kinda confusing bc i did not use any names. Da reason for dat is i just dunno wat name to give to each of em hahaha so i keep it dat way. Oh and thank you very much for reading it!!!!! ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄

    Nxco.ni April 22, 2017 12:14 pm
    Yeeep da main character is a girl and by saying "better than my beloved" she is referring to nii-chan. Awww omg thank you so much for reading!!! ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ Kisa-chan

    ohhhh okeh. thanks for explaining. nice work!

    Kisa-chan April 22, 2017 12:22 pm
    ohhhh okeh. thanks for explaining. nice work! Nxco.ni

    No problem. It is actually kinda confusing to read bc da characters hav no names lol but really thanks again! (⌒▽⌒)

    Nxco.ni April 22, 2017 1:25 pm
    No problem. It is actually kinda confusing to read bc da characters hav no names lol but really thanks again! (⌒▽⌒) Kisa-chan

    its okeh. you can always improve

    Kisa-chan April 22, 2017 1:52 pm
    its okeh. you can always improve Nxco.ni

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