I think it had potential and I don’t think it’s bad or anything but I do think it really lacks in its plot and storytelling.
The story is clearly there but it’s like the author has never heard of a scorned woman before. There’s just no way the FL after all she went through in her previous life could be fools by such obvious schemes.
Not to pull gender into this but it’s reads like a man that’s never met a woman wrote this. Or a man that thinks women are incapable of doing for themselves.
I get that historically for the time it would probably be more accurate to put it that way but given that the story is about preventing her grandfathers death and not ending up back in a situation like she was in, it’s just odd that there are times when she seems like the same naive and timid girl that was abused in her past life.
I think it had potential and I don’t think it’s bad or anything but I do think it really lacks in its plot and storytelling.
The story is clearly there but it’s like the author has never heard of a scorned woman before. There’s just no way the FL after all she went through in her previous life could be fools by such obvious schemes.
Not to pull gender into this but it’s reads like a man that’s never met a woman wrote this. Or a man that thinks women are incapable of doing for themselves.
I get that historically for the time it would probably be more accurate to put it that way but given that the story is about preventing her grandfathers death and not ending up back in a situation like she was in, it’s just odd that there are times when she seems like the same naive and timid girl that was abused in her past life.
Its just weird and tbh frustrating