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Omg literally i was re-reading this bec i saw it updated and i was literally so disappointed by the story. It literally reads like a big synopsis/recap for the actual story or a short story turned manhwa like what is happening, theres no exploration of character growth or anything
Yes exactly! It gives me that same vibe as recaps before episodes that they used to have when tv was weekly. Where it just gives main points. Like where is the substance? I asked for a burger not buns.
Ok idk if it's just me but this is moving so fast. Like I think there is good chunk of chapters missing. I wanted to see him court her, her exploring the feelings. Her making it clear to him why his background is threats. Like wtf is even going on? It feels like the author just made a french list of things that need to happen, the points but there is no filler. It just a burger with steak slapped between but nothing else. Which sucks bc FL is very cool. Even if she lost her sharpness as the chapters went on.