CONFUSION

I_AM_A_SALTED_FISH December 12, 2024 7:21 am

As we all know the black haired ML was r*ped by an omega in heat, which MC understands. He never once blamed the ML which is seen as he confirms that the ML loves him in his head monologue (Though he seems to hate their dynamics as Alpha and Beta which seems to be a very heavy and psychological burden on his mind). What he does do is blame the people around him; that are forcing him in uncomfortable positions. This includes allowing the omega move in. We don't actually know more on the development with their relationship in the time between the rut and him apologizing and the omega moving in, which is at least several months as we can see from the baby bump. What we do know is that the relationship probably grew cold. No one offs themselves simply because of outside pressure when your husband clearly has only you in their eyes. (I know that in some cases this could be the case however it seems MC's reasons all revolve around the BH ML) There is also a mention of lack of intimacy, but this could just be chalked up to ptsd. So, then the story continues, and MC kills themselves. Now we get to the rebirth. As soon as MC reawakens, he mentions he would not like to continue their relationship. Obviously, this could be taken as just him be emotionally heighten with just reviving and presenting. But it doesn't change the fact that he seems to want to end their relationship and move on. This however is ignored as the ML and proceed to have sex. The Mc then is now and omega which the author brushes off the blame onto the BH ML, which leads to the question why now? Why does his Alpha pheromones turn him into and omega in this life and not the past? Probably because the story is shit. Now then MC now has the problem of needing alpha pheromones for plot purposes. Obviously, he wouldn't go to the man he wants to get away from. Would you? I sure as hell wouldn't. So, he seeks a no strings attach that eventually leads to some questionable papapapa scenes. I mean this man is induced to pseudo heats each time. He's pregnant Hooray!! He has multiple baby daddies. I'm sorry what? It's already magical to have Mpreg but you mean to tell 3 different sperm cells manage to impregnant 1 egg? Anyway, the whole point of this is basically me going over how bad this is plot wise. There are holes absolutely everywhere. I also typed out this because some people think the Mc is trashier or the Ml, which obviously they're equally trashy. But I hate to see when someone goes into detail about something but half asses it. If you're going to go all analytical on a story that in no way deserves a dive deeper than the surface at least try to look at all sides of the story. In the end I hope we can all agree that this is a lackluster Manwha that only exist so the author can write 2 tropes, Harem and Mpreg. Thank you for listening to my Ted Talk.

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