the author has potential to make really good toxic stories but the progression, timing, and general execution aren’t good. i think this story is pretty interesting but at the same time it’s messy and missed the mark on certain aspects. i don’t see anything wrong with violent revenge or blackmail plots but you need to give a character some foundation before putting it in or else it feels lackluster/not as impressionable. do other people feel the same??
i always feel like this author lacks depth or direction when it comes to this. ive read short stories with less than 10 chapters do this trope justice without coming off “meh”… in simple terms
the author has potential to make really good toxic stories but the progression, timing, and general execution aren’t good. i think this story is pretty interesting but at the same time it’s messy and missed the mark on certain aspects. i don’t see anything wrong with violent revenge or blackmail plots but you need to give a character some foundation before putting it in or else it feels lackluster/not as impressionable. do other people feel the same??
i always feel like this author lacks depth or direction when it comes to this. ive read short stories with less than 10 chapters do this trope justice without coming off “meh”… in simple terms