Decent Story so far

OoferGang December 10, 2024 4:11 pm

It feels really dense and rushed, there haven’t really been many moments for us to connect to the characters much. Hope that changes later tho
Side characters feel like it’ll be the whole plot of the story. “He’s too weak to do it.” He does it “Well he’s still weak” seems to be the whole plot
Good time waster but other than that it doesn’t feel very thought out.

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