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to be honest, I think their love was a bit forced because of the timing. It was slightly too fast-ly paced, if that makes sense? If this was more stretched out, I think the love build up could've more smoother :)
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I actually really liked it, I haven’t read the extras but the main story was a breath of fresh air.
I didn’t read it all in one go so I don’t really remember much but from what I recall the only thing missing was xray scenes. Like other than that it was pretty good lmao. I do think their love was a bit forced but what can you do. Solid 6.5-7/10