The backstory and main story being shoved together is kinda making this hard to read, it doesn’t look like it’s adding anything so why even put it? I get interested in one plot point just for them to move onto another?
it's really not. Just stop reading if u dont understand at least THIS much. Bigschlongpapi
I didn’t say I didn’t understand, it gets annoying to be interested in one part for them to skip over to the next. You would’ve understood if you used a little reading comprehension. Me saying “hard to read” doesn’t = “I don’t understand”.
The backstory and main story being shoved together is kinda making this hard to read, it doesn’t look like it’s adding anything so why even put it? I get interested in one plot point just for them to move onto another?