So I just finished reading the novel. To be precise I skipped to the part where Lucia finds out she’s pregnant and then read from that point all the way to the end of the side chapters lmao. So for those that wanna talk about it and have also finished the novel, pls don’t mention anything before that- I’m reading out of order and just going back to further arcs before the main story ending lmaoooo. Anyways big spoilers ig:
Anyways, I liked it, the ending was pretty chill, not much conflict from after that point I started reading at. The only disappointing thing I would mention is the very last side story. (The side stories are long arcs that are separated into parts). The last side story focused on the ancestors and the origin of the pendant that Lucia was able to use to get this second chance at life. But imma be fr, it was boring ngl. I obviously wasn’t gonna be attached to some random ancestors that aren’t directly involved with the any of the main characters. And the origin of the pendant wasn’t even that huge. It didn’t have to be as long as it was. It could’ve literally been summarized in one chapter lol. I would’ve preferred to read about several other characters stories than some random lol.
Like we could’ve gotten more story about what happened to Chris (Damien’s friend who went to travel the world that author decided not to show him again at the end). Or what happened between damien’s mysterious love who he hadn’t found yet. They just left it open ended like that. (Their meeting was those cliche gender bender stories, where a girl pretends to be a boy and attended the academy he went to, and he fell for her while knowing she was a girl. Then she left the academy one day and he couldn’t find her after that. We never got any more info on that)). Or more about their daughter evangeline’s story in the future, maybe meeting her potential love interest. Boys seemed to be interested in her, like the third prince Ethan, or Chris’ younger brother Jude. Or even the possible hint of Roy’s son (around the same age as eve) being sent personally by Hugo, as a future knight to protect evangeline. Or even the scene where Lucia gives the important brooch as a gift to Hugo, we never got to see his reaction. Or the ending of the story where Lucia and Hugo met in the original timeline. There were so many potential side stories to choose from but the origin of the pendant was it??
So I just finished reading the novel. To be precise I skipped to the part where Lucia finds out she’s pregnant and then read from that point all the way to the end of the side chapters lmao. So for those that wanna talk about it and have also finished the novel, pls don’t mention anything before that- I’m reading out of order and just going back to further arcs before the main story ending lmaoooo. Anyways big spoilers ig:
Anyways, I liked it, the ending was pretty chill, not much conflict from after that point I started reading at. The only disappointing thing I would mention is the very last side story. (The side stories are long arcs that are separated into parts). The last side story focused on the ancestors and the origin of the pendant that Lucia was able to use to get this second chance at life. But imma be fr, it was boring ngl. I obviously wasn’t gonna be attached to some random ancestors that aren’t directly involved with the any of the main characters. And the origin of the pendant wasn’t even that huge. It didn’t have to be as long as it was. It could’ve literally been summarized in one chapter lol. I would’ve preferred to read about several other characters stories than some random lol.
Like we could’ve gotten more story about what happened to Chris (Damien’s friend who went to travel the world that author decided not to show him again at the end). Or what happened between damien’s mysterious love who he hadn’t found yet. They just left it open ended like that. (Their meeting was those cliche gender bender stories, where a girl pretends to be a boy and attended the academy he went to, and he fell for her while knowing she was a girl. Then she left the academy one day and he couldn’t find her after that. We never got any more info on that)). Or more about their daughter evangeline’s story in the future, maybe meeting her potential love interest. Boys seemed to be interested in her, like the third prince Ethan, or Chris’ younger brother Jude. Or even the possible hint of Roy’s son (around the same age as eve) being sent personally by Hugo, as a future knight to protect evangeline. Or even the scene where Lucia gives the important brooch as a gift to Hugo, we never got to see his reaction. Or the ending of the story where Lucia and Hugo met in the original timeline. There were so many potential side stories to choose from but the origin of the pendant was it??