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yeah like maybe let the first 20 ish chapters be before she dies. maybe have some of them be the after she dies and the others reactions over the years. and Then start when she is reincarnated.
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yeah like maybe let the first 20 ish chapters be before she dies. maybe have some of them be the after she dies and the others reactions over the years. and Then start when she is reincarnated.
I really wish this story had started with her going on the adventure when she was still Aryn and bonding with all the characters. It makes things feel a little empty when we just get flashbacks and quick explanations to situations or characters that the reveals don't feel as fulfilling. Almost like being explained an inside joke, it's just not as funny if you weren't there to experience it first hand.