i like the story itself but the pacing is a bit off… if this is meant to be a short stor...

i like the story itself but the pacing is a b...
venuwx December 5, 2024 4:51 pm

i like the story itself but the pacing is a bit off… if this is meant to be a short story i get it but if not… everything is happening too quickly

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    cocoa puffs February 2, 2025 3:03 pm

    i didnt quite get doc being jealous at the party, just a few panels ago he said lets never meet again lol

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