
Fr. First 40 chaps was frustrating to read since the story is not progressing enough + quiet annoyed of mc' personality liek does he have survival instincts? He doesn't have a plan on his own how to get out of that prison and just blames his stupidity. Tho probably its bcs of his issues/ trauma why he is like that

I agree that it‘s too long, it would’ve been a much better read with fewer chapters; as for the MCs personality: I sadly have people in my (private and work) life who‘re EXACTLY like that… well, let‘s call it naïve (⊙…⊙ ) sooo, I believe it‘s okay to depict him like that, for this kind of story and pacing at least haha
Don’t expect too much and take it as a light smut nivel, than it does not let you down sksk
4.5/5 Stars The beginning is a bit rocky and briefly it get‘s a bit repetitive and singular, with Iri and Chick repeating the same things/dialogues and the Story not pushing forward (also I personally knew from the very start who the real culprit is and smelled the red herring miles away ssksk (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ) BUT if you get through these few chapters, it‘s an all in all really cute and wholesome story! Even though the setting is a prison, there’s not much graphic violence and no r*pe (which is a huge plus in my BL book), only a somewhat 'lil obsessive green flag Alpha and a somewhat naive and inexperienced Omega, who are head over heels for each other. Will definitely read again and absolutely do recommend! I even hope for a Sequel and/or more Sidestories! ლ(´ڡ`ლ)