I actually really enjoyed reading this.. if I ignore the forced bottoming in the beginning I think the set up is good, plot and characters are developing well so far. While there are some typical elements, it still has some originality and had me engaged the entire time. Shoulda let it marinate more lol
I actually really enjoyed reading this.. if I ignore the forced bottoming in the beginning
I think the set up is good, plot and characters are developing well so far. While there are some typical elements, it still has some originality and had me engaged the entire time. Shoulda let it marinate more lol