Waaaait this was so good and the 2 plot twists at the end were so crazy and genuinely unex...

YaoiManga101 December 3, 2024 5:19 am

Waaaait this was so good and the 2 plot twists at the end were so crazy and genuinely unexpected but I don’t hate it. It was foreshadowed way beforehand so it makes sense and I really cannot hate it. I just wish they had more time to flesh out that whole plot with the uncle and the aunt. Like they show ONE singular panel of the uncle and aunt arrested and on trial at the end… but like… where’s the actual plot for that? I’m assuming it was because of what Cedric and the grandpa was talking about, but you’d expect that the author would actually show it happening and show Cedric finding actual evidence to put them in jail…and then also finished up with the whole “grandpa letting the uncle and aunt talk down to cedric” by showing a scene where he apologized and such. Without that kind of scene, I feel sad for the grandpa because it seems like Dillon never forgave him so she probabaly never allowed the grandpa to see the great grandchild. But I can’t really be mad at that because it IS her child anyway. I just thought they would give the grandpa a redemption scene since it seemed like he was meant to be a good character that brought happiness to the family overall.

The author definitely rushed through the other smaller plot lines that they put in,so that they can focus on the romance. The romance was still VERY VERY good and this story was super hilarious so I can overlook the plot line stuff. Excellent story overall

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    YaoiManga101 December 3, 2024 2:33 pm

    Even after a night of sleeping, this story still bothers me and has stayed on my mind in a way that other manwhas with similar plots have not. I think I am slightly mad at the author for ending it like that without really fleshing out those certain plot points and not giving the grandpa his redemption arc where he apologizes. Justice for grandpa. This story was so so good and I love it so so much, so that's why it bothers me that the story ended way before it should have. I don't know if the author got tired of it or was rushed by their publishing company but maaan. This definitely deserved longer chapters. I haven't genuinely laughed this hard at a manwha in a long while and I love the characters so much. The rushed ending (not the romance) makes me so mad that I want to make fanart for this story to give them a proper ending. The romance part of this story was fantastically done and I don't have any qualms with it. Just wish to see more of their happiness tbh.