Pretty obvious by my profile picture but I read this whole thing solely because the ML is exactly my type. The story itself is a 5.5/10 for me to be honest..the argument is kind of mid and there’s plot holes all over the place..
I could point out the several amount of unnecessary/filler actions and characters but I’m way to lazy for that. So if you’re looking for a good story this is not the one. Honestly, this storys feels like a light snack before you find an actual good one.
THAT being said, Asriel I want you to show up in my dreams, please. You’re too gorgeous.
Pretty obvious by my profile picture but I read this whole thing solely because the ML is exactly my type. The story itself is a 5.5/10 for me to be honest..the argument is kind of mid and there’s plot holes all over the place..
I could point out the several amount of unnecessary/filler actions and characters but I’m way to lazy for that. So if you’re looking for a good story this is not the one. Honestly, this storys feels like a light snack before you find an actual good one.
THAT being said, Asriel I want you to show up in my dreams, please. You’re too gorgeous.