1. really like the mc but i need him to stop walking head first into danger with zero feaar like buddy your body and sizes are not what they used to be so have some caution 2. the little brother is so annoying like bro you need therapy and jail and his pissing me off 3. i feel bad for the og person hope he got peace since supernatural stuff happens in this world he should be living a new happy life 4. i feel we deserve more romance and more torment of the lil bro 5. lowkey it doesnt feel finished like maybe a timeskip of them living together and hanging out with friends would be nice to give more happy vibes or just a date chapter or something. I think its bc the climax was the practically end of the story, like ok conflict over, look they happy, the end. - It would have been nice if they made a grave for han siwon (really hoping thats his name) as a way for the mc to say good bye to himself but also to give han peace without being forgotten, like bro youre scared of been erased this poor guy has no one to mourn his tragic passing. - Also it would have been nice to see more of the parents we see how his parents were so new parent dynamics would have been interesting. And like they set up this warm parent hug and smiles in the hospital and then we never see them again - Also the lack of settings, the main setting was school which is fine but it was also like the only setting, like idk change the scenery to make the story more alive. - lastly the resolve to the conflict, joonhon just continues on, the lil bro gets threatened and thats it, i feel like more needed to happen like one solid beating with broken bones to make up for the fact they killed someone while i would still be mad at least we have some peace 6. so yeah its was fine ˘◡˘
1. really like the mc but i need him to stop walking head first into danger with zero feaar like buddy your body and sizes are not what they used to be so have some caution
2. the little brother is so annoying like bro you need therapy and jail and his pissing me off
3. i feel bad for the og person hope he got peace since supernatural stuff happens in this world he should be living a new happy life
4. i feel we deserve more romance and more torment of the lil bro
5. lowkey it doesnt feel finished like maybe a timeskip of them living together and hanging out with friends would be nice to give more happy vibes or just a date chapter or something. I think its bc the climax was the practically end of the story, like ok conflict over, look they happy, the end.
- It would have been nice if they made a grave for han siwon (really hoping thats his name) as a way for the mc to say good bye to himself but also to give han peace without being forgotten, like bro youre scared of been erased this poor guy has no one to mourn his tragic passing.
- Also it would have been nice to see more of the parents we see how his parents were so new parent dynamics would have been interesting. And like they set up this warm parent hug and smiles in the hospital and then we never see them again
- Also the lack of settings, the main setting was school which is fine but it was also like the only setting, like idk change the scenery to make the story more alive.
- lastly the resolve to the conflict, joonhon just continues on, the lil bro gets threatened and thats it, i feel like more needed to happen like one solid beating with broken bones to make up for the fact they killed someone while i would still be mad at least we have some peace
6. so yeah its was fine ˘◡˘