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Look look look of course they are end game but it’s the way the story progress that just makes this the stupidest shit ever. I’m not saying there should be a redemption arc sense this is a toxic story BUT AT LEAST make the chasing arc good. WHERES the chasing arc here? Barely none! Instead of seeing this like a “Awh they understand” moment now the readers only see these two so dumb
“But you’re still also Eugene to me” and yet you willingly let yourself be near him, be touched by him … and make this weird love in bed … alright.
“I want to stand before you as a good man” BUT HES NOT A GOOD MAN FOR YOU!!!!
Is the author trying to make an “Awh” moment of the two understanding? Because it’s not working at all. maybe these two only understand each other because they’re slow asf but everyone else I know is staring at the MC like he the most DUMBEST MC ever.