This is just badly written

i think it's pretty well written, it's just that the plot is laced in to the smut

The pacing is good, everything else is bad. And the smut isn't even actual smut, it's romanticized rape but that's just 1 of the things which makes it a waste to read （￣へ￣）

i feel like they have an idea and that idea is there!! except the rape is like there with it... the whole time