Wasn't the best but it was a good read 6.5/10

GeGeBue November 30, 2024 3:03 pm

Such a good idea gone to waste but it was good for those into this type of stories it's perfectly fine to like these stuff!!!


I feel like instead of 90% of this being js the backstory it could have also showed more romance development of our main two here, cause ML(forgot their names) seems more like a replacement then a actual REAL lover but maybe that's js my personal opinion, and also the way it ended without the mc talking and apologising to the guy with non eyes maybe not apologise but maybe talk to him for a lil while??? It js feels so halfed ass- like we got all that backstory(with was 90% of the story btw) but ended with no development and results???

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