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y’all need to stop saying this every single time somebody doesn’t like something u like girl it’s corny atp if i don’t like a certain piece of media i have every right to criticize it, it’s not my fault you are too scared to think critically about anything you consume because it would force you to also criticize yourself aka your porn addiction and the negative effects that do come (regardless of how much u love to deny it) with continuously consuming poorly written slop that turns very real and serious problems (such as r*pe and ab*se) into fap material. get well soon girl xoxo
i’m sorry is the archaic dialogue too difficult for the readers to understand or sounds poetic enough to the point that nobody reading this is actually comprehending the awful writing that’s hiding underneath? maybe you should look at the pictures that are actively portraying horrible abuse and use your head to realise that any sort of romantic troupe that apppears/will appear will be the death of this story. i feel like most bl authors should just stick to drawing and leave writing behind because they clearly don’t know how to do it. a plot driven by the authors own loser ass fantasies somehow trying to be made into a “romantic tale” solely through the characters personality and their own story which ends in inconsistent behavior on the characters side because their own stories are far too big and serious to fit into a literal porn plot. if you only know how to draw hentai then just stick to that. trying to make porn into a story doesn’t work, u just end up with a poorly written, literal dogshit story.