literal dogshit

floptinabadussy November 30, 2024 9:22 am

i’m sorry is the archaic dialogue too difficult for the readers to understand or sounds poetic enough to the point that nobody reading this is actually comprehending the awful writing that’s hiding underneath? maybe you should look at the pictures that are actively portraying horrible abuse and use your head to realise that any sort of romantic troupe that apppears/will appear will be the death of this story. i feel like most bl authors should just stick to drawing and leave writing behind because they clearly don’t know how to do it. a plot driven by the authors own loser ass fantasies somehow trying to be made into a “romantic tale” solely through the characters personality and their own story which ends in inconsistent behavior on the characters side because their own stories are far too big and serious to fit into a literal porn plot. if you only know how to draw hentai then just stick to that. trying to make porn into a story doesn’t work, u just end up with a poorly written, literal dogshit story.

Responses
    Phishyphish December 1, 2024 4:41 pm

    Meant to dislike <3 It’s not anyone’s fault but your own you can’t comprehend the writing style. Maybe stick to something more simple?

    floptinabadussy December 2, 2024 8:56 am
    Meant to dislike <3 It’s not anyone’s fault but your own you can’t comprehend the writing style. Maybe stick to something more simple? Phishyphish

    talking abt me sticking to something simple when u couldn’t even understand my comment yeahh i think the call is coming from inside the house for u

    eriwma December 15, 2024 8:45 pm
    talking abt me sticking to something simple when u couldn’t even understand my comment yeahh i think the call is coming from inside the house for u floptinabadussy

    if you dont like it, leave ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    floptinabadussy December 16, 2024 8:19 am
    if you dont like it, leave ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍ eriwma

    y’all need to stop saying this every single time somebody doesn’t like something u like girl it’s corny atp if i don’t like a certain piece of media i have every right to criticize it, it’s not my fault you are too scared to think critically about anything you consume because it would force you to also criticize yourself aka your porn addiction and the negative effects that do come (regardless of how much u love to deny it) with continuously consuming poorly written slop that turns very real and serious problems (such as r*pe and ab*se) into fap material. get well soon girl xoxo

    eriwma December 16, 2024 3:18 pm
    y’all need to stop saying this every single time somebody doesn’t like something u like girl it’s corny atp if i don’t like a certain piece of media i have every right to criticize it, it’s not my fa... floptinabadussy

    you can criticize it all you want, but will all due respect, many people arent going to care. especially as ur posting it in a comment section with people who dont mind those dark themes Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)

    wiz January 13, 2025 3:31 am
    you can criticize it all you want, but will all due respect, many people arent going to care. especially as ur posting it in a comment section with people who dont mind those dark themes Σ(  ̄□ ̄||) eriwma

    girl u have cozy obsession on your list, just stfu