It’s clear the author wasn’t sure about how to end this.

LeatherKitten November 29, 2024 11:51 am

Started off really nice, but man the pacing really took off at rocket speed from chapter 8 onward. Which led to this feeling rushed, which it shouldn’t have since it’s 11 chapters. Should have been more than enough to say whats necessary. I think the author trying to squeeze in a cliche, last minute reunion with the ex really hurt this. Even the situation with the mom was wrapped up in a seemingly comical way that doesn’t fit the tone this started off on. Think this one had an editing problem overall.

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