Started off really nice, but man the pacing really took off at rocket speed from chapter 8 onward. Which led to this feeling rushed, which it shouldn’t have since it’s 11 chapters. Should have been more than enough to say whats necessary. I think the author trying to squeeze in a cliche, last minute reunion with the ex really hurt this. Even the situation with the mom was wrapped up in a seemingly comical way that doesn’t fit the tone this started off on. Think this one had an editing problem overall.
Started off really nice, but man the pacing really took off at rocket speed from chapter 8 onward. Which led to this feeling rushed, which it shouldn’t have since it’s 11 chapters. Should have been more than enough to say whats necessary. I think the author trying to squeeze in a cliche, last minute reunion with the ex really hurt this. Even the situation with the mom was wrapped up in a seemingly comical way that doesn’t fit the tone this started off on. Think this one had an editing problem overall.