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Completely agree! I was loving the slow burn and angst but the seme should’ve left for overseas, uke should’ve continued with his career. The accident was just a pretext for seme to come back, but from that point forward it was bonkers! And the mother trying to sabotage the exhibition made no sense!!! I would’ve loved to see more angst, both of them being apart for months, even years. Uke leaving the house and seme staying overseas for longer than a month, and then reuniting by chance and realizing how truly madly in love they really were! That would be chefs kiss (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Started off really nice, but man the pacing really took off at rocket speed from chapter 8 onward. Which led to this feeling rushed, which it shouldn’t have since it’s 11 chapters. Should have been more than enough to say whats necessary. I think the author trying to squeeze in a cliche, last minute reunion with the ex really hurt this. Even the situation with the mom was wrapped up in a seemingly comical way that doesn’t fit the tone this started off on. Think this one had an editing problem overall.