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FishBones November 26, 2024 12:35 am

Wish he had more chapters of just being water. The speed is rushing but it's a good read

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    StressedFox November 26, 2024 6:40 pm

    Same, I get that the info and understanding rushed into his head and now he can just, be a great spirit but I wanted some more chapters of him messing around and trying to get the hang of being water,,

    Like give me a few interactions where he can't figure out how to keep his form and he just keeps dissolving into a puddle, like, "'yeah, no, I'm listening, just ignore this, it happens'''

    Uke November 27, 2024 5:07 am

    Yeah like his traveling through water channels then he goes to the rivers then discover some caves then inside it are some artifacts that he could turn into human form, something like that, it would be much more interesting him being like the see in Moana "the water is a friend of mine"