i feel like im the only one with a complaint here for now. like dont get me wrong, i like ...

dreaminglows November 25, 2024 7:26 pm

i feel like im the only one with a complaint here for now. like dont get me wrong, i like the concept and premise. and the art is gorgeous. but the execution of the story is so... lacking. i feel like everything was rushed and we were speeding through the events of the plot that i could barely connect with the characters. its a shame though cos i really do like the artstyle and the concept had potential to be a good story.

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    Y@0 November 27, 2024 9:56 am

    A bit of a spoiler for future readers but...





    I got whiplashed how everyone just brushed off San being ostracized for like the whole story by almost everyone, then by the last chapter, they like him all of a sudden because he made it rain. The end. Like wtf.

    dreaminglows November 27, 2024 12:12 pm
    A bit of a spoiler for future readers but...I got whiplashed how everyone just brushed off San being ostracized for like the whole story by almost everyone, then by the last chapter, they like him all of a sudd... Y@0

    right, like it felt very unsatisfying like where are the apologies...? they treated him like he brought bad luck with him his whole life then we just got one moment to resolve all that and we dont even see their reactions properly nor the aftermath of that...