The Author can make a better one with the idea though

Risha November 24, 2024 12:11 pm

I am sorry but i know i am not an author but … the idea is there, i kinda get it. But the execution tbh making so many headache.

So … basically the MC realized that ML already abnormal since he was a child. << This is when you need to bring the flashback author … how he know and still keep getting close to ML, this is the reason that he do not trust ML>> His feeling grow but at the same time since he knew that ML can not feel like he do, he decide to make a distance between them.

ML knows he himself abnormal yet at the same time he felt that only MC understand him and makes him feel can be himself without being seen weird. When the MC make a distance between them, ML was frustrated since the only bond he has was with the MC. He become more obsessed. He prepared everything waiting for MC ending the Military Service, he had prepared the apartment, already got permission from that scumbag Father. The MC was trapped in the middle since the only escape from his father is living with the ML. Then He had his escape with living in the dorm. ML let him be while planning for another push. But he become crazy as he seen the MC get close to other than him. Thats the breaking point. He manipulate the Father to force MC living either at the house or with ML.

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    Risha November 24, 2024 12:18 pm

    The MC choose live with ML. Of course during the daytime, he will be still interact with other people, when he go home the ML will be there and has iritating expression. One day MC come back drunk and smell other person’s perfume. ML is angry and they fight. The next day, ML is calming down and tried to talk, meanwhile he is trying to manipulate MC to do everything include sex only with him. MC seeing it as a chance since he knows best that ML wont love him back. He promised himself that, it will be the goodbye of his love toward ML. While they were having sex, ML want to kisss MC but he refuse saying this sex is not because of love, which Physical only. He want to kiss the one he love which making the ML misunderstood that MC has other person. ML is planning to make MC feel pleasure so that he can not do it with anyone else.

    Risha November 24, 2024 12:22 pm

    The next day… MC felt awkward but ML treat him normally. What MC do not know is … ML plans to do that like everyday. At least with that … he will know if someone else slept with MC.

    It happend for sometimes. MC getting exhaused everyday which raised suspicion with the other friend. Their friend begins to notice something is wrong. MC fed up one day and fight with him, decide to sleepover in his other friend. ML go there and persuade him to go home, after mentioning his Dad, MC gave up and go home with him. In the way, ML finally said that he will only slept with MC when he wants it only. But of course is not a full truth. The next day … he bought lot of liquor. And he did not slept with MC everyday but he do touch him just to check

    Risha November 24, 2024 12:36 pm
    The next day… MC felt awkward but ML treat him normally. What MC do not know is … ML plans to do that like everyday. At least with that … he will know if someone else slept with MC.It happend for sometime... Risha

    They havent been slept together for awhile … which makes ML frustrated. He concluded that MC wont sleep with him anymore. In his head, he picturing MC getting intimate with the Senior who teaches him how to smoke. MC also refusing to drink at home since he is busy with school which making him more frustrated.

    MC is out with the other friend. That Friend finally raise a question about both of them. MC finally confessed that he loves ML but he did not felt the same. Which being heard by ML who do not have job << Too rich maybe

    Risha November 24, 2024 12:42 pm
    They havent been slept together for awhile … which makes ML frustrated. He concluded that MC wont sleep with him anymore. In his head, he picturing MC getting intimate with the Senior who teaches him how to s... Risha

    and his only job is stalk MC. After being so frustrated so long finally he get an idea how to keep MC at his side.

    When MC reach home. ML is waiting and Confessing that he loves MC. Which of course MC not believe any of that and refuse his advances. ML confuse because he thinks that it will definitely works, since he knows MC love him. But because he did not want MC knows that he stalk him, he ask MC to think about it, he asking him to have a relationship trial with him. MC finally agree.

    They date for a while and lovey dovey. MC begins to feel that ML is being sincere until he heard the conversation. ML is talking with the friend about proposing. That friend ask if he loves MC which ML response with yes but the way he say it, MC knows that he lie. ML let his guard down because the opposite is not MC.

    Well … after several days … MC finally speak up and ended that temporary relations with accusation that you are not even love me, and go back to dorm because he felt awkward living with someone that pretend to love him.

    Risha November 24, 2024 12:46 pm
    and his only job is stalk MC. After being so frustrated so long finally he get an idea how to keep MC at his side.When MC reach home. ML is waiting and Confessing that he loves MC. Which of course MC not believ... Risha

    After MC go back to the dorm, ML is Frustrated once again. This time … there is no plan needed, since MC literally cut him off. Then we can proceed with the Manhwa scene where he talk to the friend and that friend makes him realized that he do love MC, which he can not know since he incapable of emotion, he is raised by the parents that scared of him. No one teach him how to love so he only can be obsessed. Proceed to piano scene, MC go to ML apartment then ML finally showing his vulnerable side which so hard be hidden. He finally tell MC that he is abnormal, his parent scared of him, and even when he loves MC, he do not know.

    Risha November 24, 2024 12:54 pm
    After MC go back to the dorm, ML is Frustrated once again. This time … there is no plan needed, since MC literally cut him off. Then we can proceed with the Manhwa scene where he talk to the friend and that f... Risha

    I think i will end the story with their daily life which sometimes ML do something weird but MC being understand and teach him how to convey what he wants and what is the feeling.

    Honey November 30, 2024 5:53 pm
    I think i will end the story with their daily life which sometimes ML do something weird but MC being understand and teach him how to convey what he wants and what is the feeling. Risha

    You literally fixed it bro thanks

    Risha December 1, 2024 9:25 am
    You literally fixed it bro thanks Honey

    Youre welcome (▰˘◡˘▰)