So much potential

Spoilers bitches

This story has so much potential and I can see myself continue reading until the end. However, I think there’s so many things that weren’t considered well, like the production of the FL.

FL is actually a pleasant character who seems to be taking a lot of measures in this Timelapse to secure herself safely. I give her the benefit for doing what she could given what’s written for her.

However, FL has so much potential to unravel things. It seems so she died so many times, but I guess it took her longer to process. But by that point, I would assume she would have gained more info prior to this Timelapse. I felt her powers were just thrown in out of nowhere at the beginning. If she had that power, she would’ve been able to get things done earlier unlike other FLs in other stories who do not have powers.

The ML has so many clues too and I like the timing of each new thing to reveal about him (plus when we couldn’t see his face when he vulnerably expresses to the FL). I think his actions are a reaction this time, but I wonder why it took him this many deaths to get things set. Did he revive too? From the beginning? Or start gaining memories of his Timelapse’s as he goes? What is his power exactly? What is his relations to FL?

Plot is stereotypical. The FL’s EXbest friend can go suck it. EX fiancé can go get his dick toes and tongue chopped off. He can be put to live in a barn and watch other animals fuck for all I care.