this story is ass

yaoi.manga.fujoshi November 23, 2024 3:48 am

this was quite a long and tough read ngl. i think beatrice acts too childlike throughout most of the story and she is unrealistically too kind and happy about everything

secondly, allen literally tried to abort her baby without her consent, and then beatrice literally cuddled with him in bed like 10secs afterwarda

and dont get me started on how people couldnt tell she was a girl???

the random homosexuality plots were so out of place because the author just kinda forgot about trigger (but it was quite funny sometimes ngl)

and speaking about forgetting, the author also forgot she was a herbalist for a good 80% of the story until the end

i also think her being reincarnated doesnt rlly add to the story at all

Responses
    me aa November 24, 2024 1:41 am

    i was a fool to think ill get a more in depth scene and reaction from the tea part, like shell be upset and could immediately tell the tea was rigged knowing that all this started as beatrice being a skilled hernalist