um u cannot be taking this serious… are the lights on in that head of yours, this is obviously a joke are you genuinely okay
first of all im gay IRL lmao shocker!! which is why i feel comfortable saying this. who in their right mind would say it with full conviction. on a website full of gay stories mind you? you need to work on your mental, because the joke was a hyperbole. do you know what a hyperbole is perchance?! have u ever taken an english literacy class?
the idiots who genuinely believe im homophobic pissed me off because one look at my page is enough to know im in the el jee bee tee or that i at least enjoy bl/gl and im obviously joking ???
WHY TF WOULD I READ 90% GAY STORIES IF I WAS HOMOPHOBIC!! RIDDLE ME THIS!! THERES NO SMART BONE IN THOSE BODIES OF YOURS
u people are something else… because where in the world is that comparison remotely relevant when my original post has SO MUCH CONTEXT! i know you were trying to make me see how other people would misinterpret it, but that was the worst comparison to use. you didn’t even compare the two correctly, in levels of severity, so it made zero impact and came off insensitive + very off. “internalized homophobia” and this was 1000% a joke with a clear explanation right below it. so yes that is how it works, especially when you dont have proper media literacy skills and take everything at face value as if youve never touched the internet before. do you know how dumb you guys sound thinking someone is genuinely homophobic over the most basic english literary tool
just to give you some peace of mind and hopefully better interpretation abilities: the “main” gay couple commits atrocities towards everyone, uncaring how their love/desires harm people. correct?
so then the whole point of the “this made me homophobic” hyperbole is saying that IN MY CASE despite my love for gays (and being gay myself??) the gay people were behaving so horribly it made me hate them and myself. i don’t need to leave disclaimers left and right to want to make other gay people laugh. its YOUR job to be critical of how you consume things, yet you can’t even handle middle school level hyperboles… i can’t believe this is a real argument im having? have you guys lost your goddamn minds??
im not even done because seriously what are you guys thinking. how could a story about evil gay people seriously make someone homophobic? it doesn’t even made sense and the only statement you have to “confirm” it is the title of the post which was clearly baity and meant for mature readers with some type of sense and humor. either you guys need to pay better attention in school and/or are the type to blindly always believe fear-mongering posts online
nothing is worse than two selfish lovers in power but making them gay was the last straw. there was no obstacles in their way (no one opposing their relationship or status or even trying to seek revenge) but they chose to harm innocent bystanders and manipulate the public for what????? useless and ugly ass homosexuals the more i read this the more i was upset at how no one did shit to humble that fucking annoying blond bitch!!
now that that’s out the way, i have a lot of criticisms about the story itself. tbh ash was really lackluster as an mc. her lack of drive or love in anything made her really boring and hard to be attached to. even with her only goal being survival, it didn’t feel solid because she would always intervene at the risk of her life and impulsively at that… yet the only person punished in her stead was others or the queen? minus the time she was hit on the head by the white haired duke, but even then he already knew her and the whole “i hate and love you at once” act was unproductive to the storytelling? im all for unreliable mc’s who have a false sense of self or others, but i didn’t pick up any of this during key points in the story. the concept of this was nice, but the execution went south. i don’t feel attached to sir mio or klein and even when she was seeing them as their own person/relating to them it still felt shallow. however imo the only person she’s shippable with is the magician because he’s always seen her as she is, and even when she’s not telling the truth he’ll believe her! again though, it’s hard for me to even ship her with anyone or root for her when she doesn’t have any long term goals herself or go out of her way to be vulnerable with others. her detached nature to her previous life and loved ones, as well as what she acts like now is what bothers me about her. yes girl give us nothing!