This had potential—the start and the art were good. But right after she ran away, the pacing suddenly felt rushed, and some of the situations felt forced and ridiculous. For example, at the hunting competition—I mean, it doesn’t make sense—they have guns! Why didn’t they just shoot the boar? It felt like the author ran out of ideas and was in a hurry to finish the story.
This had potential—the start and the art were good. But right after she ran away, the pacing suddenly felt rushed, and some of the situations felt forced and ridiculous. For example, at the hunting competition—I mean, it doesn’t make sense—they have guns! Why didn’t they just shoot the boar? It felt like the author ran out of ideas and was in a hurry to finish the story.