Loving this story so far

Shitty November 21, 2024 1:48 pm

1. Surprisingly best horse ever. The horse does act cowardly but he a real one. I have read a lot where the horse is supposed to be good/loyal/brave but then runs off and leaves the human behind. So this horse is a W.

2. I keep reading the ML name as Oil not Oli.

3. Dumb ass crown, it protects her fom the ML's "bulling" but then a bad guy boinks her on the head and she gets kidnapped, and then the crown decides to be a sleep. Welp at least it was a locator for the ML to find her.

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    Juniper D November 23, 2024 5:23 am

    I can almost get over the horses hissing because that white horse is badass!

    The crown powers are weird and not well defined, for sure!